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I used to think that I was strong
I realise now that I was wrong
because every time I see your face
my mind becomes an empty space
and when your lying next to me
it feels like I can hardly breathe

I'm lost every time I look at you
I close my eyes
the moment I surrender to you
let love be blind
innocent and tenderly true
I'm lost every time I look at you

In the morning when you go
Wake me gently so I'll know
that loving you was NOT a dream
and whisper softly what it means to be with me
then every moment that were apart
will seem like a lifetime to my heart

I'm lost every time I look at you
I close my eyes
the moment I surrender to you
let love be blind
innocent and tenderly true
I'm lost every time I look at you

When you look into my eyes
do you feel it in your soul?
how can you not realise
your the half that makes me whole!
everything that I am
I'll give it all to you
you hold my heart within your hands
there is nothing I won't do!
for that chance to live inside your heart
and understand the amazing man that you are!

I'm lost every time I look at you
I close my eyes
the moment I surrender to you
let love be blind
innocent and tenderly true
I'm lost every time I look at you

I want to be
that place you run to
when your walls are tumbling down
the rock that you can lean upon
when you've lost your solid ground
be your lover and your friend
and all that's in between
from now until the end of time
I want it to be you and me!
I want to hear all of your secrets
and all your wildest dreams
wipe away the tears you cry
then kiss you tenderly

I'm lost every time I look at you
I close my eyes
the moment I surrender to you
let love be blind
innocent and tenderly true
I'm lost every time I look at you
©2006-2009 ~SatansSporn
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This is written for a very specal guy, who doesnt know he's special to me or anything, but this is how I feel about him.... He will never know because I think he has a girlfriend at the moment so :(
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Aww Hunni! That's a gorgeous poem! Maybe you should tell him...

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** I could look you in the eyes and pretend**
**I could look you in the eyes and say i'm fine**
**I could lie everyday and say everythings okay**
**But the truth remains the same**
**It never stops hurting**
awww thank you :heart: maybe I should, but #i dont want him to hate me or finish with his girlfriend or anything over me lol

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*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
and thanks for the fave :heart:

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*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
oh dear
that is sad

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ckp
discontent always
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why you think its sad ckp:

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*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
beautiful poem. expressive, yet holding back

was it thought about or did it flow out all at once?
Well done, and I know how you feel... I seem to fall for those taken guys myself.

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The Brat Princess
Mistress of Mayhem
Redhead with Attitude
the guy not knowing you so serious about him

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ckp
discontent always
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thankies :D.... it flowed out all at once... thats why its rubbish lol :D

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*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!

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