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Sick and twisted is my mind
Carnage I will leave behind
Your organs and bodyparts will be found
Aftermath of operation ground and pound

You thought you had won and
I was fighting a loosing battle
You were dead wrong
And it was well worth the hassle

Your decomposing flesh
Is all that remains
Putrid remnants left
To rott in your early grave

You underestimated me bitch
And you paid with your life
Ripped to shreds by my own hand
Wielding the unexpected butcher's knife
©2008-2009 ~SatansSporn
:iconsatanssporn:

Author's Comments

Yeah this is probablly pretty sadistic ... most people have told me it is anyway but I don't think it is. I want to do this to a person so if that mmakes me a psychopath then so be it *rolls eyes and shrugs shoulders*
Feel free to criticise it all you like, I don't really mind as long as it is constructive criticism...

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:icondarkside915:
ROOOOAH DARKSIDE LOVE IT. <OWO> So awesome and gorey and such hatred. X,D Great use of strong words and they all flow together well. :3 I missed reading your poems, I did! And they're still the only poems I like. XD For me, all other poetry is boring. X) But yours is the first and last I'll always like. ^^ And I can see you've improved muchly since I last read anything from you. I mean, your stuffs always rocked, ne, but now even MOAR! Awesome work. <OwO>

:+fav: fer juu! 8D

--
Never say Forever,
because Forever only lasts as long as right now.
In a minute.
A second.
A single solitary moment.
Forever can so easily turn into Yesterday.
:iconsatanssporn:
*squeals* Awwwwwwwwwwwww thankies so so much! me luffs yooooooooooooooou! For you to give me a fave means the world to me!!! I've totally missed you and your amazing work and kind comments!

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:icondarkside915:
Nyaaaaar you're very welcome. <^w^> *CLIIIIING* AWWW!! XD Darkside luff you too, ne~ So, so much. <3 He always wondered where you were and was super worried and missed you muchly. <;__;> And aaaack, I'm glad the fav means that much to you. :3 You deserve it! 8D *hughug* And ah thank you. ^^ *hugMOAR* I still think my artz are...huh...bad. X,D But so long as you will like them, I am glad. <OwO>

--
Never say Forever,
because Forever only lasts as long as right now.
In a minute.
A second.
A single solitary moment.
Forever can so easily turn into Yesterday.
:icongaiatheory:
Fucking brillaint, nothing better than a bit of anger! Hey I have the internet back (would explain my very very long absence) love the poem though, I say poem more letter of expressed hate!

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"And I've Paid The Price Solitude
With Wish To Worry While Your Away
With All Grace To Allow My Hand The Travel
And Worth Here Across Your Face
I Love You More Than You Could Know
In Those Eyes You Hide It Well
I Think You Do"
:icondaddio-iceman:
Sweet Typical Penguino
Im slightly worried about coming down there to see you now. me thinks you may have actually reached my level of *cough* *cough* Insanity *cough* *cough* LOL love ya :hug:

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Much Love

Ice-Man

If you look at me,
Look at me,
Not through me!!
:iconsatanssporn:
lol I couldn't possibly reach your level of insanity dude as I've by far surpassed it lol :P
love ya :hug:

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:iconsatanssporn:
*CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING* awwwr it does mean teh wurld and moar to me that you likes my work ne! <;_;> and your artz is NOT bad at all! thy are teh awsome! *huuuuuuuuuuug you*

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:iconsatanssporn:
Thanks so much! glad you like it :) Glad 2 hear your internet is back! Mine has been playing up recently but it seems to be holding for now at least ^^;

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:icondarkside915:
YAAAAAAAAY!! It makes Darkside SUPA' UBER HAPPY TO KNOW THIS. <OwO> *CLIIIIIIIIING OF DOOM* ^^ And nyaaa thank you tons for saying my arts are awesome, omg. :faint: <@@> Means tons to me, like, OMFGGGGG D: *HUUUG* I'm glad you like them and knowing this makes me wanna keep drawing. ^^ When, to be honest, I've thought of giving up the hobby many times before. :\ *seriously feels contempt for his "skill" XD* I keep, huh, comparing myself to my art-idols and I just don't even hold a wet-match up to their uber skillz of awesome. <TTwTT;;

--
Never say Forever,
because Forever only lasts as long as right now.
In a minute.
A second.
A single solitary moment.
Forever can so easily turn into Yesterday.

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